[Lyric-to-Music-Update] Isn't It Where We Go (formerly The Space of Time)

[Lyric-to-Music-Update] Isn't It Where We Go (formerly The Space of Time)

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Liner Notes: 

It just came to me now, as-is, and wrote it down, -- a 5 min write? Well, not even Smile

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-- Added Music 10October2019

Experimenting with different directions as they come to mind Smile ! (Since dug out the ole' slide on the other one, kept it out and gave it a shot again. Again, a bit tough on a Low Action Guitar, that Hamer P90 again... -- just no time to adjust, redo so many things!)

Retitled it after music because made more sense to me that way.

Lyrics: 

I stand on the edge, every moment in time,
Of my life, goes from edge to edge
And leap the space, between each slice

How different is it out…
There..., should it be,
Any different..., out there, moment to moment
Planet to planet, between each small slice

Isn't it where we go anyway
When free of this rip'd tripping climb
Why rush the rush, of hushing time
If even to moons, and dust..., and-heatwave-rust

Isn't it where we go 3x's // //
Isn't it where we go 2x
Isn't it where we go 2x

If even to moon, and dust, and heatwave shush...
Why rush the rush, of hushing time
Risk provoking, a star frightening, angel crying, crime

So..., I stand on the edge
Every moment in time,
Of my life, every moment in the time, of your life
It goes from edge to edge, between gaps of white

And leap the space..., between each small slice
So far away..., but only a gap 2x (snap #2)
You be there, while I be here 2x (near #2)
Fast enough, to actually..., go, to, the, past

Isn't it where we go 2x's // //
Isn't it where we go 2x
Isn't..., it where we go 1x end

(c) 2019 ustaknow (alias)



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Comments

billwhite51's picture

i like the rhymes and near rhymes in this verse, If even to moon, and dust, and heatwave shush...
Why rush the rush, of hushing time Risk provoking, a star frightening, angel crying crime

jcollins's picture

Looking at the lyrics...catchy opening line standing on the edge. Planet to planet is a bit of a twist and a nice visual. Isn't it where we go isn't quite specific but I think it is about the lifespan of a human being. Quite a few visuals in the moon section and keeps it interesting. Back to standing on the edge...that's good. I'm ready for the audio now (second play)...hold. steel string guitar...vocals now...low key...in tune...guitar...sounds good. Chorus now...isn't that where we go....cool guitars. Sounds blues. Vocals clear. Good job on this.