Endless Thoughts

Endless Thoughts

Amanda West's picture

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Liner Notes: 

Amanda:
This is a lyric rewrite from something I did in 2017 and was never used.
I am sure I'll tweak it more during 50/90.

Update 20th July
@metalfoot is going to collab on this. Looking forward to it Alex !

Update 20th July, a few hours alter...
@metalfoot delivered a great demo which perfectly fits the words Smile Thank you Alex Smile

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Alex:
Thank *you*, Amanda, for letting me play! Smile

Lyrics: 

Verse 1
Some things feel
Impossible
And the fight to get it done
More than I
Can deal with but
It pulls me like a beating drum

Verse 2
Days stand still
I can't move on
Then jumps a year to start again
Time bruises me
Colour of pain
What sort of life can I sustain

Chorus
It's so endless
Never stopping
Always endless
Oh so endless
Going on and on again
Endless thoughts and endless blame

Verse 3
Push so hard
then fall back down
Hit my head upon the floor
Mind moves slow
Begins to drown
I sure hope there's something more

Chorus
It's so endless
Never stopping
Always endless
Oh so endless
Going on and on again
Endless thoughts and endless blame
Always endless
Oh so endless

Bridge
Sometimes I try to lift my head
And pull myself up out of bed
I start to feel I'm climbing out
But end up falling back instead

Chorus
It's so endless
Never stopping
Always endless
Oh so endless
Going on and on again
Endless thoughts and endless blame
Always endless
Oh so endless



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Comments

metalfoot's picture

Hey Amanda--
I'd like to collab on this if I can... Smile

DeannaSweidel's picture

What a fabulous cowrite! If this gets some music, I'd love to hear how it turns out

metalfoot's picture

It's not a cowrite yet.. you *will* hear it when I do my part!

DeannaSweidel's picture

Ok this is a great collab! Alex's music and vocals are perfect for Amanda's lyrics! LOVE <3

Klaus's picture

I really like the "concrete" writing of the lyrics, especially the bridge is delicious getting the message through with description of physical events. Music is appropriately slow and vocals fittingly somber. Good melody and chords. I just checked and yes, it's A sus2 at the start of the verse. Then you just move those two fingers and you get the next chord the e minor. It's always nice when chord changes that sound beautiful are also easy to play. Smile