Ghost In Your Atmosphere

Ghost In Your Atmosphere

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Don't know what it is, but there it is, I personally like the bridge, but what do I know. it's about being invisible, the only person in a relationship.

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Ghost in Your Atmosphere
by Tammy Jann
© 2019

The sunrise
the green of the trees
The bird crying a sad melody
the scent on a breeze
you noticed everything but me

Chorus
I'm standing in the sun and under the moon always waiting for you
You don't see my affection
I'm a broken spirit
I'm starting to disappear
I'm just a ghost in your atmosphere

The sun set
the moon touched the sky
the clouds dropped tears from their eyes
the fog on the rise
you didn't see you made me cry

Chorus
I'm standing in the sun and under the moon always waiting for you
You don't see my affection
I'm a broken spirit
I'm starting to disappear
I'm just a ghost in your atmosphere

Bridge
Step into the light
leave the shadows behind
your eyes don't see me
because you are blind
I know who I am
and I'm still standing here
if you can't see me
I no longer care

Chorus
I'm standing in the sun and under the moon always waiting for you
You don't see my affection
I'm a broken spirit
I'm starting to disappear
I'm just a ghost in your atmosphere

Outro
The sunrise
the green of the trees
The bird crying a sad melody
the scent on a breeze
you noticed everything but me



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Comments

benjo's picture

the clouds dropped tears from their eyes WOW

HEY TAMS,

what a beautiful write,
reading this lyric gives off evefything it's
supposed to and more
what a sweet but sad lyric
full of emotion and warmth
can't wait to hear this one
what a stunner

I'm on my feet

billwhite51's picture

the title is so enticingly poetic and you develop the idea with skill and imagination, excellent musical development as well, reminds me of the glory days of sophisticated folk pop by women such as janis ian, joni mitchell, laura nyro and carly simon, there is definitely a place for you in that pantheon.

cindyrella's picture

This just blows me away! Very Joni and the writing stuns me. What a breathtaking song girl!

kahlo2013's picture

This is hauntingly beautiful and bittersweet in the sentiment. Poignant and poetic. The gentle guitar and your gorgeous vocals are spectacular. Love this!

Ferry Colyer's picture

Sounds full and classic Tammy. Such fine song writing and beautifully recorded too.

writeandwrong's picture

Very beautiful and relatable, Tammy Smile The chorus is stunning and love everything about the whole tune. Many people have experienced this in their lifetime.

It was soo good to see you again at FAWMStock and hope you can come again next year! <3

PhilKMills's picture

I like the "if you can't see me I no longer care" bit. At first, I thought the music was too peaceful and "up" for a sad situation, but those lines make everything come together.

aricate's picture

Wow. I love how it starts off so haunting and then get's more insistent in the chorus. Your voice, as always is so lovely.

Technicolor Gramophone's picture

Lovely and lonely and beautifully sung! Love that chorus ... the chord changes are really effective and a bit jazzy. Wonderful.