What Do You Need?

What Do You Need?

kahlo2013's picture

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Liner Notes: 

I heard this as punk rock as I wrote it but am open to any collaborative ideas for your music!

Lyrics: 

V1
signals get crossed
lines get blurred
different paths
are followed

layers are peeled
stones are turned
damaged pride
is swallowed

PC
what do you want?
what do you need?
what is your truth?
what do you see?

C
do you want
an occasional friend?
do you want
a passionate lover?
do you want
something else instead?
do you want
someone other?

V2
stories are told
games are played
history is
embellished

facades are built
walls get placed
fortresses are
developed

PC
what do you want?
what do you need?
what is your lie?
what is your greed?

C
do you want
an occasional friend?
do you want
a passionate lover?
do you want
something else instead?
do you want
someone other?

B
what are you looking for?
where is your open door?
how will you really know?
when will insight grow?

PC
what do you want?
what do you need?
what is your goal?
what is your creed?

C
do you want
an occasional friend?
do you want
a passionate lover?
do you want
something else instead?
do you want
someone other?

OUTRO
tell me, tell me please
what will it be?



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Comments

cts's picture

Ok - so I really enjoyed the read and I can envision this as the punk rocker type tune. The 2nd verse is super-duper solid. I love it. I kept repeating the chorus in my head and actually sang it out loud. The last 3 lines are a bit tricky or more succinctly, it's tricky to get to the last line of the chorus. This is mad cool.