Breakdown

Breakdown

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Liner Notes: 

Maddie, this one's for you if you want it Smile

Lyrics: 

Breakdown
© 2019 Cindy Prince

Dark, deathly
I rarely see the light
Dangerous, different
It's a blistering plight

Diving, drowning
Plunging deep
Destruction, downward
No sound when I weep

Chorus
Wreckage
Extinction
No one can hear
Breakdown
Functions
I am nowhere

Bridge
No questions can be asked
I die behind my mask

Dissolution, decay
Down in my room
Disappearing, deletion
No reasons, just doom



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Comments

Klaus's picture

Oh my, that is dark indeed. The feeling of being lost, being nowhere and deep loneliness is really well portrayed. Gives me the chills, Cindy.

billwhite51's picture

i can see maddies face and hear her voice as i read this. excellent job of wrting for a specific artist.

Kristi's picture

Yes, can't wait to see what Maddie does with this lyric! All the "d" alliteration goes well with the "doomed" idea. "I die behind my mask"....that offers food for thought. Let me know when the demo is up!