Alone In The Moonlight

Alone In The Moonlight

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In a Facebook group with a bunch of folks on here with a weekly skirmish. John posted a great prompt which yielded this song in about 20 minutes

Lyrics: 

Alone In The Moonlight
(c) 2019
Deanna Sweidel

Alone in the moonlight
You said you’d meet me here
Alone in the moonlight
I am holding back the tears

You changed your mind
Left me here tonight
Waiting for you alone
Alone in the moon’s light

Alone in the moonlight
I’m waiting in the dark
Alone in the moonlight
Swirling clouds becoming stark

You didn’t show
Left me here tonight
Waiting for you alone
In the fading moon’s light

Now the sun is rising
You never came around
With daylight truth revealed
My pain in moonlight drowned

You made your choice
Fading out of sight
Waited for you alone
Alone in the moon’s light

Alone in the moonlight
I waited there for you
Alone in the moonlight
I guess I always knew



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kahlo2013's picture

Vivid and lonely image well described. Tugs at the heart with the sentiment. Would be a beautiful emotional ballad.

metalfoot's picture

The passage of time as the song moves along helps convey the sense of sadness from being 'alone in the moonlight'. Lovely work!

benjo's picture

this lyric is lovely
it just flowed so well
lets get this to music

good luck

jcollins's picture

Time to dump this guy and move on. Too bad he had to be a jerk. Nice job on this!