I Loved You

I Loved You

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Liner Notes: 

Tried to crank out a song before work today since I got up early to write.
Back to the sadness...sometimes you just gotta write it out. May need a tweak or two later.

Lyrics: 

I Loved You
(c) 2019
Deanna Sweidel

I’ve nothing left to give
You took it all from me
My soul is broken
My heart your token
Now I’m alone and blue

I’ve nothing left to give
You took every last tear
My soul has died
My heart it cries
And all along you knew

You knew how much
You knew how deep
How deeply I loved you

I’ve nothing left to give
You took it all from me
My soul was hushed
My heart just crushed
You haunt my every move

I’ve nothing left to give
You took every last tear
My soul your prize
My heart unwise
What did I have to prove

I proved how much
I proved how deep
How deeply I loved you

It’s gone
All gone
My soul
My heart
It’s gone
All gone
All torn
Apart

I’ve nothing left to give
You took it all from me
My soul is broken
My heart your token
And all along you knew

You knew how much
You knew how deep
How deeply I loved you



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Comments

kahlo2013's picture

Strong honest feeling emotions conveyed well with the compelling lyric. The bridge will be quite effective.

coreystewart's picture

I certainly agree Deanna, you just have to write out the sadness in order to feel right again. I love this lyric, I've got an idea for it... May I Smile

barbara's picture

Superb lyric just aching to come to life!

Jibbidy34's picture

This is some powerful stuff. 'My heart your token' was a great line for me and with that a perfect rhyme. I really felt this! Phewee