On the Shelf

On the Shelf

coolparadiso's picture
Feast

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Demo: 

Liner Notes: 

20 minutes to do skirmish d

Lyrics: 

Ive worn down my shoes
ive paid my dues
Ive given all that i got

Iim likely to crash
Ive done my dash
Now I ain’t got a lot

I got few possessions
Im just one recession
Don’t look for me for wealth

The cupboards bare
Don’t seem fair
Nothing left on the shelf

Instrumental

I got few possessions
Im just one recession
Don’t look for me for wealth

The cupboards bare
Don’t seem fair
Nothing left on the shelf

Wasn’t always this
I remember a day
Once i had plenty

But its all gone now
I don’t know how
The tank is down on empty

I got few possessions
Im just one recession
Don’t look for me for wealth

The cupboards bare
Don’t seem fair
Nothing left on the shelf



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Comments

metalfoot's picture

20 minutes work? Impressive.

Catchy classic chord progression and relatable lyrics!

Klaus's picture

Nice rocking backing. I like how rough it is. The song is a bit more folk. It's amazing how much you get done in such a short time.

Acousticmaddie's picture

Interesting whispering take. Great vibe. Nice lyrical direktion on The prompt

Technicolor Gramophone's picture

Really rocking ... cool juxtaposition with the mellow vocals. Love "I'm just one recession"!