sit at my table

sit at my table

plainwhitetoast's picture



Liner Notes: 

I wasn't super inspired by my music track when it came time to put down vocals. I had a few ideas for lyrics... under the table, as in pay/work, being drunk under the table, and this one that I used about sharing a lunch table. blahber blahber skirmish.


I don't mind if you sit at my table
take a moment away from the crunch
we could be quiet or chat about the day
sit a while and eat your lunch

mumble mumble (don't sing with your mouth full)
won't you sit with me at my table?

Please keep your comments respectful, honest, and constructive. Please focus on the song and not the demo.


AndyGetch's picture

Not sure why this makes me think of the common teen refrain on American Bandstand "I like the beat and its easy to dance to". Maybe it's a hit in the making!

kahlo2013's picture

Love your vocals on this and the sweet simple message and lyrical melody. Great hook!

metalfoot's picture

Pleasant melody and arrangement, and yeah, the lyrics need something but it's skirmish so that's usually the deal for all of us! Good work. Smile

JWHanberry's picture

This is a very friendly song. I like the "don't sing with your mouthful" line. Good idea, it's hard on microphones. Wink

Chip Withrow's picture

I really like this! It has a welcoming, comfortable vibe and groove. Giving it a second listen now.
Really captures the good feeling of taking a break from the grind for something as simple, yet important to our sanity, as lunch.
Nice skirmishing!

OdilonGreen's picture

Fun song, with an appropriately inviting feel given the theme. Smile Very charming skirmish track, and I like the mumbles!

ductapeguy's picture

This has a great vibe and solid gem of an idea. It would be worth polishing up.