storm cloud

storm cloud

plainwhitetoast's picture

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eh, it's a skirmish song. lyrics are a bit rough. it's all quite simplistic.
(note to self: capo on 4)

Lyrics: 

rain...
summer storms again

it's been raining so long
it's a wonder I still have a roof over my head
it's been raining so long
it's a wonder

pitter patter not a matter
pitter patter not a matter

storm cloud roll on by
keep your thunder out of my mind
storm cloud roll out of here
keep your thunder out of my ear

it's been raining so long
it's a wonder I can't any more wet
it's been raining so long
it's a wonder
it's been raining so long
there's a cloud living in my head
it's been raining so long
so long

pitter patter, night time's sadder
pitter patter

storm cloud roll on by
keep your darkness out of my mind
storm cloud roll out of here
keep your thunder out of my ear

it's been raining so long
and I cain't

pitter patter, doesn't matter
pitter patter, night time's sadder

storm cloud roll on by
don't let your darkness into my mind
storm cloud roll out of here
don't keep your thunder out of my ear
storm cloud roll on by
don't put your darkness into my mind



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Comments

alyxanderjames's picture

I'd call this solid work for a skirmish! It's got a catchy groove to it. And, at least where I am, it actually HAS been raining a ton, so this feels relatable on that level lol

metalfoot's picture

Simplistic but catchy as heck for all that. Nice skirmishing!

johnstaples's picture

Not simplistic at all! Brilliantly folk and a delight to listen to! Your vocals are ACE and the basic instrumentation just works so well! I enjoyed my listen quite a lot!

coolparadiso's picture

simplistic i do see as a bad thing. This is nicely done a very good skirmish. The vocals work spot on for this!

JWHanberry's picture

I feel your pain. Just had the 8th wettest June in history. Need the weather report to plan when to mow. Sheeesh!

Amanda West's picture

Sounds like you live over here on the west coast of Ireland lol
The vocal really emphasises the constant rain. Love how you go all soft, just like rain does sometimes.