Cool Summer Sweet (See Demo 38461)

Cool Summer Sweet (See Demo 38461)

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Cool Summer Sweet

V1
temperature is rising
sun so bright and hot
I need some relief
from the heat wave we’ve got

there’s iced lemonade
cherry popsicles too
I need to cool down fast
not get hotter next to you...

L
Ooo...ooo...ooo....hotter next to you

C
cool summer sweet...
hot passion heat...
waking up my lips
with each touch and kiss

cool summer sweet...
hot passion heat...
dripping down my chin
inviting you in

cool hot
summer passion
sweet heat

V2
thermostat is broken
now losing all control
skin is burning up
chasing where this will go

inhibitions are waning
doused by desire
the heat is so intense
our bodies now on fire

L
ah...ah...ah.. bodies now on fire....

C
cool summer sweet...
hot passion heat...
waking up my lips
with each touch and kiss

cool summer sweet...
hot passion heat...
dripping down my chin
inviting you in

cool hot
summer passion
sweet heat

C
oh...
melt me with your charm
wrap me up in your arms
feel my affection
with sweet confections
dripping cool summer sweet
in our hot... hot... hot...
hot passion heat

ohhhh....ohhhh... ohhh

C
cool summer sweet...
hot passion heat...
waking up my lips
with each touch and kiss

cool summer sweet...
hot passion heat...
dripping down my chin
inviting it in

cool hot
summer passion
sweet heat



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Comments

metalfoot's picture

Phew! I'm feeling warmed up by reading that one!

Stephen Wordsmith's picture

Passion is such a sensory thing, isn't it? All this imagery makes desire run hot and cold, and this song becomes something you can feel in your pores and taste on your lips. Marvellous.

wobbie wobbit's picture

hot start to the summer! i like the extremes and the sensory passion. have a great (hot) (cool) summer!

Kristi's picture

Welcome to summer! Ha. I like the mixture of descriptions you use..."sweet heat" and "doused by desire" and how it's happening right now...in this moment. Well done!

OdilonGreen's picture

I can feel the sultriness through just the words; definitely deserving of being the title track of your 2019 50/90 'album'!

Valerie Cox's picture

That's pretty steamy. The popsicle melting metaphor goes a very long way. Cherry is of course the best flavor. Smile Song goes splendidly with your cover art.

splittybooms's picture

Yow!!!
Almost burned myself on this one lol
Quite the sultry and steamy hot vibe with this.
Excellent play and rhythm to the lyrics as your pop/dance/r&b work always has.
This is prime for some great pop vocals and production!
I seem to be stuck in the old school inside my head, so I can also hear some Earth Wind and Fire funk taking this over, as well, with quick melodic vocals in the verse and a full, sweeping chorus.
You know its a great write when you can make people hear the music when there is none!

Technicolor Gramophone's picture

Really cool and refreshing ... just like an ice pop in summer. And then it gets all steamy and sexy ... nice transition. The concise phrases have a real punch to 'em!

Aging Ophelia's picture

I hear this as cool and jazzy, but the words bring the fire for sure. The tastes, the wet film on the side of a cup-- it's all in there.

jcollins's picture

Hi, I'm going to look at Val's demo but I'm going to comment on the lyrics here.

v1 sets the scene nicely with second and fourth line rhymes. Very good visuals in this section and the knock out last line hotter next to you...very nice. The lift is awesome and I love to see ooo...ooo...ooo written into the lyrics. I know later there is some ah...ah...ah...but I haven't gotten there yet. The chorus is brilliant. I listen to oldies and hear songs like this on the 60s channel DirecTV. v2 expands on the message even further and just a very nice songwriting project. The second lift features the bodies now on fire. I think the next part is the bridge and I love the use of "oh" in songwriting too. This section has a lot of good rhymes and features hot...hot...hot... and ohhh...ohhh...ohhh. Again, I love to see these things written out because it is quite clear these are hooks. Chorus and out. Yeah Liz, I know how good you are and you proved it again here on this song and I'm just seeing it for the first time. Great job on this. Val is one of my favorites and I'll see you over there.