That Game

That Game

Chandra83's picture



When we first met
It was like a dream
Until I learned
You're not what you seem

You wanted my body
Without my soul
You wanted a piece
And rejected the whole

But I don't have time
To play that game
And I'm looking for someone
Who feel the same.

Please keep your comments respectful, honest, and constructive. Please focus on the song and not the demo.


metalfoot's picture

Ugh. Been there done that. Very relatable and solidly concise!

kahlo2013's picture

That second verse sums up that type of feeling used relationship so well. Nice clear and concise.

Stephen Wordsmith's picture

That second verse, damn. That's the sort of verse that gets sampled and plastered over a thousand tracks in a thousand genres. Concise, wise, and cutting.

cts's picture

Yeah, I have to agree, too - that second verse packs a serious punch!

the pannacotta army's picture

Hi, I always like the direct and uncomplex form of your lyrics/poems. Would you mind if I put some music to this?