Leaves

Leaves

cindyrella's picture
Feast

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Liner Notes: 

I love this time of year and this is what came to me.

Lyrics: 

Leaves
© Cindy Prince 2018

Yellow
Falling
Mellow
Feeling

Crimson
Wisdom
Tender
Rhythm

Chorus
Falling lovely leaves
Cooler Autumn wind
Time for wrapping up
The seasons have changed again

Bridge
Burnt umber
Time for slumber
Spell I'm under

Amber
Glamour
Goose
Gander

Maroon
Moon
Moving
Soon

Repeat chorus



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Comments

coolparadiso's picture

i love this structure - about time i did one again! some great words here burnt umber slumber gander amber etc

mike skliar's picture

what great and creative and evocative rhymes!!!! really nicely done!

mine (just done) is not quite as 'autumnal' tho i guess its part of that circle of life thing- i really like your lyric alot

yam655's picture

This was nice. Sparse, like autumn leaves. Smile

tcelliott's picture

Minimalism working so eloquently. Excellent. It goes to show that sometimes a simple attack can be devastating. Yes, it looks easier than it is, but you've managed to convey a damn fine image with the shortest of verse lines.