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So i have caught up - a few need music at a later time! So i have done all 14 just in time

I think this might be a bit of an upbeat number

Lyrics: 

I was Trying to make a change
I was Seeking for a refund
Thought i had it right
but I was totally shunned

I don’t want to have to name my price
All i want
all i want
is my ticket my ticket to paradise

It seems like you always have to pay
Be it one way or another
But I’ve paid more than my share
Thought id built a buffer

All that is left to eat is rice
All I need
All i need
Is my ticket my ticket to paradise

Nothings ever easy
Perhaps its better that way
Always the question
Should I go or should I stay

I wanted the change to be nice
All i wish for
All i wish for
Is my ticket my ticket to paradise

Striving to go forward
Trying to find a way
Trying to make things bearable
For every future day

Nothing i find will entice
All i wish for
All i wish for
Is my ticket my ticket to paradise

I don’t want to have to name my price
All i want
all i want
is my ticket my ticket to paradise

all i want
is my ticket my ticket to paradise



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Comments

metalfoot's picture

Don't we all! Very relatable sentiment in these lyrics. Great skirmishing!

tcelliott's picture

I think the chorus is catchy. Ticket to paradise seems like a good motif to use with the prompt.

JWHanberry's picture

Good repetitive pattern which develops over the song. Well written. Waiting for the music. It's amazing that you did all fourteen. I think I did six and I'm done in!

barbara's picture

I like that rhyme of another/buffer. And "I don't want to have to name my price" stood out to me as a very juicy kernel of something. I'd like to hear more about that.

musicsongwriter's picture

Very nice, upbeat catchy lyrics. Looking forward to your demo. Thank you for taking part.
Nadia

mike skliar's picture

some nice phrases- i like the different rhymes on paradise...