That Building Blocks My View

That Building Blocks My View

tcelliott's picture
NOT SAFE FOR WORK
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Liner Notes: 

Wanted to take an original perspective on the prompt... well, I think I did that, maybe.

Lyrics: 

I've got my binoculars
And decide to look outside
And I see a sweet angel
She's dressed in light, she's shining bright

And I can't help but stare
As she walks away
And as she turns the corner
It's like the dark clouds blocking my sun rays

That damn building blocks my view
That damn building blocks my view
Darkness drowns the light
Blocks out her shades and hues
That damn building blocks my view

I got myself some dynamite
An evacuation plan
'Cause that terrible building
Is more than I can stand

If I ever get a glimpse of her
You know, I'll run outside
I just need one more look
I refuse to be denied

That damn building blocks my view
That damn building blocks my view
Darkness drowns the light
Blocks out her shades and hues
That damn building blocks my view



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Comments

cindyrella's picture

Oh, this is certainly original! And brilliant, I might add. Good skirmish!

metalfoot's picture

Building blocks as a phrase. Sweet and unexpected take on my prompt! Great work, TC. Solid music too. You're crushing it this weekend!

yam655's picture

Haha! Nice take on the skirmish! Well done! Smile

AndyGetch's picture

Hehe on the reframed prompt Smile Catchy and nice guitar work too!

JWHanberry's picture

Great original perspective. I never would have thought that up even though it's happened to me. Good sounding guitar too. Fine skirmish.

kahlo2013's picture

Ha! This is clever and fun, delivered with emotion and purpose! I can feel your frustration!

coolparadiso's picture

Really nice song - love the guitar chords on this! really catchy and a good lyric to back it up!

splittybooms's picture

You cheeky sonofagun.... lol
Love it.
From the use of the prompt to the chord progression and structure (i'm a sucker for this that you used); smile-inducing.
Just uh...stay out of trouble, eh?