Our Intimate Playground

Our Intimate Playground

tcelliott's picture
Feast

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Liner Notes: 

Well, my wife had to go to work early this morning so.... they say write what you know.

Lyrics: 

You look so enticing
In the fine clothes you wear
But I wish you'd come back to bed

You're up early
Say you've got to go to work
I wish you'd stay with me instead

I know you have things to do
And you have people to see
But I wish you would stick around

Let's see what we can do
It's just you and me
In our intimate playground

I pull you close
As you hug me goodbye
I just love the smell of you

As I give a squeeze
There's a twinkle in your eye
A future promise we won't refuse

I know you have things to do
And you have people to see
But I wish you would stick around

Let's see what we can do
It's just you and me
In our intimate playground



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Comments

metalfoot's picture

Yes. This. Exactly.

Nicely written and very relatable!

coolparadiso's picture

i like intimate playground!!! that guitar is taking a work out! nice delivery of a good lyric!

barbara's picture

That's just beautiful. I can't imagine any better portrait of a couple that is still in love in a healthy relationship. The little details tell so much. Cinematic for me.

colgoo's picture

Great skirmish! Also, I really like what you did with your guitar on this. It sounds much more polished than the time in which you produced this. Great work!