Dark Clouds In Front Of Me

Dark Clouds In Front Of Me

tcelliott's picture
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My own prompt.

Lyrics: 

I can feel the tension rising
And I can feel the storm arriving

Dark clouds in front of me
Blocking out the light
Dark clouds surrounding me
As I wait for the lightning strike

I hear the whispers of the spirit voices
I hear the question, 'Are there any choices?"

Dark clouds in front of me
Blocking out the light
Dark clouds surrounding me
As I wait for the lightning strike

I feel the darkness slowly closing in
I feel the presence, spirits on the wind

Dark clouds in front of me
Blocking out the light
Dark clouds surrounding me
As I wait...

Dark clouds in front of me
Blocking out the light
Dark clouds surrounding me
As I wait for the lightning strike



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Comments

metalfoot's picture

Intense lyrics and the dark clouds lyrically and musically feel like they're going to win. The second chord in the chorus adds to the intensity!

Cicpisces's picture

I feel the increasing tension. Clouds getting closer and darker. Nice atmospheric piece. Nice strong guitar playing. Good strong lyric.

pearlmanhattan's picture

Well done. Lyrics are intriguing and well written. I live the presentation. Good prompt too. I love the pause....

JWHanberry's picture

Very stormy feel to this. I like the minimal couplet verses with the focus then on the powerful chorus. Good write.

coolparadiso's picture

opening guitar sets up the dark clouds nicely! it builds tension nicely - good lyric and structure to the song!! very good skirmish