Birds In Flight

Birds In Flight

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I had a quick play before work on Wednesday, and improvised this piece.

I actually like what’s here in a way - short (under a minute), relatively simple seventh chords (only two of chords), four lines of lyrics that I don’t think need expanding upon...

I like long songs, standard length songs, and short songs.

Video here, as it won’t let me put an Instagram link in the “demo” section - https://instagram.com/p/BoMp56ghgQ5/

Lyrics: 

Birds in flight
Make me smile
All the while
Birds in flight



Please keep your comments respectful, honest, and constructive. Please focus on the song and not the demo.

Comments

billwhite51's picture

this lyric will give the zen masters something to chew on for the next centuries.

cindyrella's picture

It is perfect just as it is. Says so much and so beautifully. Love it.