(Better not) Piss Me Off

(Better not) Piss Me Off

tcelliott's picture

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Liner Notes: 

GYAWS prompt "open doors"

I've been pretty proud of the fact that I don't have very many throw away songs this 50/90... but this is one of those that was just for fun.

Lyrics: 

Try not to make me mad
I'll get even, just wait and see
I'll open all your doors
Let all the bugs and flies get in

Better not piss me off
Better not piss me off

Better not make me made
I'll find a way to get back at you
I'll open all your doors
Let all the vagrants march right in

Better not piss me off
Better not piss me off

I'll let the bugs and flies right in
I'll let all the vagrants march right in
I'll prop your doors all open for you
And there's not a single thing you can do

Better not piss me off
Better not piss me off
Better not piss me off
Better not piss me off



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Comments

cindyrella's picture

I bet you enjoyed doing this one! I enjoyed my listen. Straight to the point!

billwhite51's picture

sounds like something neil young might have written to let crosby stills, and nash know they better watch their step or he would leave the group again.

splittybooms's picture

Gotta say, the main thing that stood out for me is your vocal performance, which I found to be very pleasing to my ears.
Then of course the quite perfect strumming.
I was listening to this while typing something else, and I kept hear "better not piss me off" lol
Just for fun, huh? Dude this would make it into my music library if you released it on an album, for real.
Everything is sounding great here.

Acousticmaddie's picture

Great melody and very funny. Love the statement in the song:) Thats me before the morning coffe.