50-90-43

50-90-43

Graceville's picture

Demo: 

50 90 43

Lyrics: 

Your hugs are cold like an undertakers handshake
Your lips are cold like a dead mans kiss

what have I done but nothing to put up with this
and you know that you walk all over me and my LOVE FOR YOU

FOR YOU

and I try to breathe and use that oxygene
so my heart will go on LIKE IT IS

you don’t touch the ground, you’re an angel
you could kill me with a soft kiss, cuz I’m so
fond of you
of you of you

You walk all over me like NANCY SINATRA
IF EYES COULD KILL I’D BE DEAD BY NOW
TRYING TO FIGURE OUT REASONS WHY YOU HATE ME
AND COULD I TURN ALL THIS HATE TO LOVE SOMEHOW
AND I’D DIE FOR YOU, IF THAT’S WHAT YOU WISH
YES I’D DIE FOR YOU

FOR YOU

THE TEMPERATURE DIVES WHEN YOU ENTER THE DANCING FLOOR
BUT MY HEART BEATS FASTER CUZ MY FASCINATION HAS NO END

WILL I BE A PILLAR OF SALT FOR EVER MORE
OR DISSOLVE OUTSIDE IN THE RAIN
WHILE I CRY FOR YOU
FOR YOU



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Comments

standup's picture

Dark! Undertakers, dead men.

That's a powerful line, you walk all over me and my love for you. I think that might be the hook, if you recast the song maybe that would be something to bring back later in the song?

I do like the flip between love for you/die for you/cry for you, though.

Your songs are really lovely, I have no idea why you don't get more commens.