The End

The End

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That's me done... 50/90 challenge completed!

I thought I'd end this challenge by writing a positive, acoustic pop song about... The End

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The End
© 12/9/2018 C. Stewart

Verse 1
As I looked, I wiped those tears from your eyes
As I watched I felt, I was mesmerised

Chorus
But it’s a long way to go to the end

Verse 2
Where I stood, I felt my life just pass me by
I’m sitting here waiting, but I don’t know why

Chorus
But it’s a long way to go to the end
But it’s a long way to go to the end

Bridge
To the end, to the end
To the end, to the end
Keep moving, keep moving

Verse 3
I looked up and the heavens above just smiled at me
No longer do I feel so alone, I am so free
Look ahead, not to the ground
Travel far but don’t make a sound

Chorus
But it’s a long way to go to the end
But it’s a long way to go to the end
But it’s a long way to go
Such a long way to go
To the end…



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Comments

Cicpisces's picture

Not such a long way to go. You've made it. Love the relaxing mood you create with your music. Really atmospheric. Simple and effective lyrics. You make the hard work look easy. Good job.

billwhite51's picture

congratulations on crossing the finish line with yet another winning song.i have enjoyed your work this year. you have a magnetic voice and lovely sense of melody.

benjo's picture

Hey yeah this is really gooooood stuff
i too love the hook
this stays with you afterwards
hey don't stop now there are too many lyrics
out there to collab on nudge nudge ha ha
great work bud loved it

Tim Fatchen's picture

Excellent. And yes, that is some hook! Download! And you made 50! Congrats!!