I Need An Autumn Breeze to Come Over Me

I Need An Autumn Breeze to Come Over Me

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Skirmish Prompt: Autumn Breeze

Lyrics: 

V1
I wanted an
autumn breeze
but I got a massive hurricane

I hoped for a
light springtime mist
but got torrential tsunami rains

I needed a
little of your love
but you drove me wild...wildly insane....

C
you swept me up
like a cyclone
made my heart
skip a few beats

you drowned me
in flood waters
you knocked me
right off my feet

you spun my
head in circles
scorched my skin
with sizzling heat

now I need major relief
oh I need to feel
that cool autumn breeze
come over....come...
come over me...

V2
I wanted the
warm summer sun
but I got a scorching sunny sky

I hoped for a
calm chill of winter
but was rocked with endorphin highs

I needed a
little of your love
but instead you made me...made me fly

C
you swept me up
like a cyclone
made my heart
skip a few beats

you drowned me
in flood waters
you knocked me
right off my feet

you spun my
head in circles
scorched my skin
with sizzling heat

now I need major relief
oh I need to feel
that cool autumn breeze
come over....come....
come over me...

B
a misty breezy easy
sentimental love
was all that I
was looking for....

but a wild gusty lusty
tumultuous love
I got when you
blew through my door...

C
you swept me up
like a cyclone
made my heart
skip a few beats

you drowned me
in flood waters
you knocked me
right off my feet

you spun my
head in circles
scorched my skin
with sizzling heat

now I need major relief
oh I need to feel
that cool autumn breeze
come over....come...
come over me...



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Comments

nancyrost's picture

As a fellow Madisonian, I concur! And I'm definitely feeling the weather/passion symbolism. I especially like the sound of "wild gusty lusty tumultuous love". Yet another cool take on this prompt.

Cicpisces's picture

Great set of lyrics. I love the comparison of the breeze to love. Provides a great metaphor and you pull off some great lines. Feels highly erotic in some places. Touch of humour too. Such a good job.

MarkG's picture

Turn on the fan, girl. It's steamy hot in here!

JWHanberry's picture

Great use of many weather related terms to describe human feelings/actions. Excellent write quick or not.

Ha ha beware for what you wish! Nature is of so much beauty but its extremes are extraordinary! Well captured!

metalfoot's picture

Weather and passion connect so naturally for songwriting and this is no exception. Nicely done, Liz!