Let me

Let me

Roel van Veldt's picture

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Liner Notes: 

Finally ready! It always takes me so much time to get the demo right. Thanks for your patience! Smile

Lyrics: 

I cried for you today
I wish I could take the pain
I’d do anything to give you
Sunshine for the rain

I can carry the weight
Of the world on your shoulders
Shelter you from weather
That is colder

CH
Let me be the one you lean on
Let me hold you tight
I can be your rock
I promise you
I’m by your side
It’s going to be alright

I wept for you today
I want to take the sorrow
I’d do anything to give you
Happiness tomorrow

I can hold the burden of
Life’s heartaches and trials
I’d do anything to give you
Peace for a while

CH

Don’t turn me away
Don’t shut me out
Don’t give up now
Don’t ever have doubt
That

I want to be the one you lean on
I want to hold you tight
I will be your rock
I promise you
I’m by your side
It’s going to be alright



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Comments

billwhite51's picture

what a power ballad i can imagine meatloaf doing this . your dynamics are just right.very skillful construction of the lyrics as well.

Kristi's picture

Lovely sentiments offering strength to this person coming from a place of strength. All the lines with "I" give it power too. I like how the music starts out soft and builds...I got the feeling of hope with a sincere and dedicated delivery of this story! Nice!

cindyrella's picture

What a beautiful and powerful song! Breathtaking in fact. Bravo!

kahlo2013's picture

This is such a lovely collaboration both the lyrics and the melody both deliver such a longing and tenderness.

wyatt's picture

Good sentiments, good song.
A simple hook that could go in any number of directions
Well done you two