again...about an hour and half in, i realized this was supposed to be a skirmish!
Sorry ya'll...but I was having too much fun!
So yeah just a little dance number with some kinda 80s lyrics.
Tried to keep it interesting while maintaining a constant melody....i guess...
Again....synthvox is kinda letting me down here in the vamp, as it wouldn't say the words rapidly enough to maintain the groove. Sigh...
But I hope the feel comes through anyway.
I can just see a crowded 80s dance floor with neon, big hair, sunglasses, spandex, ankle warmers....and some guy in a denim jacket with his collar starched to death so it'll stand up in the heat of the place....dancing toward some girl he's trying to win over. He's spent all week toiling on his job, taking care of business and stuff, now he's here for one thing, to dance until his sore feet can't dance anymore just to win her heart!
That's what I hoped to convey.
Sore feet from workin
Sore feet from runnin
sore feet from movin
Feet ain't for nothin
Sore feet from chasin
Sore feet from racin
Sore feet its so true
Tryin' to reach you
(vamp/refrain..chorus? whatever you call this)
dancin for your heart
dancin for your love
sore feet from dancin
just keep on dancin
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