Take It Slow

Take It Slow

JWHanberry's picture
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Thanks to the man with no power for a fine prompt.

Guitars: Guild D-25
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Note: Skirmish: 1 hour to write and record

Lyrics: 

Take It Slow

Some days it's slow goin'
When I'm feelin' down
I turn on the TV screen
Bad news all around
I hop into my trusty truck
And head on in to town
But nothin's happenin'
There's no where else to go
It's just too slow.

I could sit and wonder
What it's all about
But pretty soon I hit the wall
No ideas start to sprout
Another cup of coffee
Might help to bring it out
What's the answer?
Couldn't say 'cause I don't know
It's just too slow

Bridge
Slow ain't all that bad I guess
If there's nothin' else to do
Try not to make too much mess
If you're slow I guess
You don't want to be the clean up crew

When I wake up tomorrow
Hope I'm feelin' good
I can make some progress
Doin' what I should
But if I start to draggin'
It'll be well understood
I'm not lazy
Just goin' with the flow
I'll take it slow.

2018 John W Hanberry (ASCAP)
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Comments

pearlmanhattan's picture

I enjoy your tunes so much! Well done all the way around, good production and great writing. thank you!

tcelliott's picture

I'm not lazy
Just going' with the flow
I'll take it slow.

Yeah, you have a good melody and a good sounding guitar with good playing. Honestly, this simple demo sounds pretty darn good. Adding the shaker was a nice touch. I think your voice suits this lyric quite well.

metalfoot's picture

Love the way the song itself has a laid back groove to it. Great lyrics. Enjoyed the song a lot!

kahlo2013's picture

Wonderful pace and phrasing for this prompt - as always your delivery is spot on. I like the core sentiment as well - going with the flow, but not so slow that we get stuck with the the mess. Well done!

musicsongwriter's picture

Beautiful song and take on skirmish. I like the concept, the sentiment and the whole song works so lovely. A pleasure to listen to.
Nadia

splittybooms's picture

Days like this are many for me; I relate.
Set against the ideal stylings on guitar and delivered with vocals which convey this whole mood perfectly.
Great ending, too!