50-90-16 It may change * * * *

50-90-16 It may change * * * *

Graceville's picture
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Demo: 

50 90 16 It May Change

Liner Notes: 

I have a part time therapeutic/coaching job. That's what this song is a bout.

Lyrics: 

It may change for the better
It may change to something god
It may change your life completely
if you feel that you should

but I can’t tell you what to do
you have to try it out for yourself
time will get you to the end of the road
if you walk it step by step

I wont steal the dream from you
but help you carry the heavy load
I’ll be walking next to you
down that daunting road

It may change for the better
It may change to something god
It may change your life completely
if you feel that you should

oh you gotta find a way to love yourself
but tell me if you need any help
i’ll be there, I’ll be there



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Comments

billwhite51's picture

this goes beyound therapy into the realm of universal truth. fine song, well stated, explored, and performed.

standup's picture

Nice sound, the open chords and the melody is doing a cool thing. There's a lot of "thump" to your right hand, not a criticism, it adds something. Sweet song, a message of support but not controlling.

I like the section with vocal harmonies, simple but opens things up.