Finally a new tune. The last weeks were spent with the great mystery called life
This song started via the random collaboration forum (http://fiftyninety.fawmers.org/content/random-collaborations). Peter did send me the lyrics with the words "So, here are some off the cuff lyrics. You can interpret and change them how you see fit for the collab. Any of these sections could be a verse, or a chorus, or bridge, etc."
Don't know whether we have a chorus in this tune.
Anyway I had some weird rhythmssection ideas in my head along with the vocals. Bass and drums play an approximation of these ideas.
The guitars came last and are more or less decoration. But I like the direction this tune took.
Drumsounds by EZdrummer
Hagstrom and Telecopy guitar.
Reworked the mix with some of the tips concerning vocal timings etc. Would like to work more on the drum programming. Later...
Broken Sunset (Lyrics by Peter Arvidson)
This revolver won't do me any good
If I can't fire any bullets
The words that make me think I should
Worry about your silence
Soul crash, broken flask
Sullen window ashes
Pale horse, death mask
Marks you as he passes
Reform, these shores
Beach side ammo cashes
Trigger pulls, so cruel
Onto greener pastures
Wasted fears last long into the fall
When leaves change, and the sunlight fails us all
Check ins from friends can't ever seem to mend
This broken heart sunset that wishes they'd pretend
Lets save the best for last
We'll make it a graceful dance
With such a lovely hollow past
Your future has a fighting chance
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