Where Are You

Where Are You

splittybooms's picture

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Demo: 

Liner Notes: 

The ONLY reason I put these vocals on here is because I finally got my mic working again with my PC. I do not sing, do not claim to know how to sing, do not claim to have any kind of potential FOR singing!
Disclaimer over.
I also wanted to try a more traditional piece of music..but....i still ended up pouring some ambient sauce all over it anyway. Ohwellz
I won't say what the song is about, because I truly enjoy reading what people feel when they hear stuff.

Lyrics: 

So.
Where are you?
Tell me.
Where are you?



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Comments

wimx52's picture

Good vocal effort for someone who claims not to sing. The vocals suit the downtempo nature of the music perfectly and help create a very moody and engrossing atmosphere. Highly enjoyable listen.

fresh spotless youth's picture

First of all, I really like this. The simple piano chords on the quarter notes make a sort of hypnotic groove over which you add that sweet piano riffage. The vocal totally works, adding quiet emotion to the piece, and you should sing all the time.

[Before I started fawming, I literally could not sing, inasmuch as I couldn't hear melody in my head. Even simple and ubiquitous melodies like Mary Had a Little Lamb slipped out of my grasp. But when I started writing songs, everything changed. I like to sing now. You should sing more. You don't need to "know" anything. You need to feel something, as you seem to do here.

cblack's picture

Nice piano. And I have to agree with @fresh spotless youth - singing is about emotion, rather than doing it "properly". Let those emotions out, and the vocals will improve. Easier said than done, I know, but if you want to work on your singing, emotions are the place to start. Smile

Anyway, I enjoyed this piece. Nice one! Biggrin