original sat in a folder since 2015.
was really kinda trippy and the levels were all over the place, way too loud and abrasive. just never sounded good.
I did like the concept - a slow, broodish, electric feeling, thumping, weird thing.
I still don't like the kick through the main part of the song...admittedly I'm not spending enough time on mixing with these 50/90 songs
Added some little vocal stuffs here and there, and created a new drum part for the end of the song, which...i feel I should have extended with some variations.
Please keep your comments respectful, honest, and constructive. Please focus on the song and not the demo.