It Ain't No Secret

It Ain't No Secret

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This was the GYAWS prompt of the week this week. Gwyn's lyrics and my music.

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IT AIN’T NO SECRET ANYMORE
(c) 2018 Cooper/Jones

V1:
You tried to keep the facts concealed
But now it all has been revealed
The secret that you held in store
It ain’t no secret anymore

V2:
You thought that I would never find
‘Cos out of sight was out of mind
What you had hid behind that door
It ain’t a secret anymore

BR1:
Now the whole world and his nosy wife
Will get to know about your private life
No longer so safe and secure
It ain’t a secret anymore

V3:
And what a shock it’s proved to be
I can’t quite take it in you see
The truth just made me drop my jaw
It ain’t a secret anymore

V4:
When the landlord came to fix the light
He was met with an unlikely sight
Poems and paintings all to me galore
It ain’t a secret anymore

BR2:
Now everybody in the neighbourhood
Knows your true feelings and I guess that’s good
I suspected but I wasn’t sure
It ain’t a secret anymore

B3 or V5:
You’re not the only one with secrets though
I’ve got one now that I can let you know
I feel the same way…it’s you I adore
It ain’t a secret anymore
No...it ain’t a secret anymore



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Aging Ophelia's picture

A great twist! I love that, the confounded (and then delighted) expectation. The great hook line, the clever way you build to your reveal-- all makes this a song that has proved hard to get out of my head.

cindyrella's picture

Another great song! Love the concept and the twist!

Cicpisces's picture

Aww. Sweet song. Love the rhythm and beat. Great storytelling. I pre-empted the last verse which was good. It went exactly where I hoped. Love happy endings. Has a cute humour to it.

Happy ending i assume. I love the lilt of the song it just bounces a long.

cblack's picture

Great vocals! Just really well sung, and fitting for the lyrics. Smile

benjo's picture

Thank you so much for your kind words on
one of my lyrics
I love this of yours, it ain't no secret any more
what a great title
and the content is so meaningful
you hit it out of the ball park here
lovely vocal and melody too