Superhero

Superhero

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i wrote this last night before my voice went on vacation - was going n this.

in a challenge elsewhere i got this

My daughter xxxxxx sorted through some old boxes and found many scrapbooks and notebooks. Among the papers was this song, written when she was about 11 years old.

Your prompt... rewrite this song. I want to be a hero

I want to save people
I want to be famous
Like my old grannys jam

I want to fly above the ground
And twirl around
Swoosh up there
Swoosh everywhere

Save that cat up a tree
Extinguish the big fire
Gotta help someone
who has a flat tire

no one would be in danger because of me
I wish I wish I had just to be
The one the only hero

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I wish i was a superhero
Like in Dc or marvel books
Everyone would stare wide eyed
At my costume and good looks

Everyone will doff their caps
Say here comes my hero
Better than grannies jam
A person for tomorrow

La la la la la la la, la la la la la la la la lal

Ill leap across tall buildings
Just to save a cat
Ill put out fires with just one breath
Whatd you think of that

Id fly around spiraling
Stopping at this juncture
Always ready to help someone out
And to just repair a puncture

La la la la la la la, la la la la la la la la lal

Still i wish i was a superhero
Like in Dc and marvel books
Everyone would stare wide eyed
At my costume and good looks

Flying from place to place
My wishes have come true
I had become the saviour
for everyone like you

La la la la la la la, la la la la la la la la lal

Supehero



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cindyrella's picture

How great is this? A super hero of a song! Love the la la la and feel of it.

kahlo2013's picture

Oh this is sweet and tender! Love the la la la sections. It seems like it could be a sweet lullaby that lures children into wonderful dreams. Nicely done!

Chip Withrow's picture

Brilliant - if I read the lyrics without music, I'd expect something upbeat. But what you do with these words is so tender, heartfelt, and charming. Love your melodic spoke/sung vocal. Wow!