Two ships in time
oneslowtyper I like songs that end on a happy note.
I personally like the comparisons in V1 and V3 that show the two souls "almost" meeting.
Coolparadiso - when i read the lyrics i couldnt get them out of my head - i heard the song - been busy but a little break appeared at the right time - so hope i did these great lyrics justice - i didnt change any lyrics at all but did slightly change where the solos where and repeated the last verse.
Two Ships in Time
She walked across the desert…
She swam across the ocean…
She climbed the highest mountain
To be free
She searched for many lifetimes
She hoped one day that she’d find
That someone who remains
It seems time and space colluded
To deny her destiny
Two souls were set adrift
Their ships were never meant to meet…
He got lost in the sand dunes…
Was rescued from a riptide…
And climbed the second-highest
He searched throughout the cosmos
And hoped someday that he’d know
The reason he’s denied
It seems time and space denied him
Of the rendezvous he seeks
Two ships passed in the twilight
Will love ever come to be…
They say that fate is fickle
And each spirit has a twin
Were the Gods just being spiteful?
Keeping her away from him…
It seems time and space and even God
Were standing in the way
And when hope was weighing thin
Their spirits finally overcame…
And once again, love found a way…
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