Doll Baby

Doll Baby

DeannaSweidel's picture

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Got the idea for this early this morning but I had to go to that pesky thing that pays the bills. So here it is...Doll Baby

Lyrics: 

Plastic, emotion free
Dressed all up in lace
Perfect brunette curls
Painted pretty face

Play with me
Dress me up
Enjoy your little lady
And when you’re done
Back on the shelf
Goes your doll baby

Honey colored skin
Ebony eyes on call
Taken out to play
Like a baby doll

Play with me
Dress me up
Enjoy your little lady
And when you’re done
Back on the shelf
Goes your doll, baby

Silent I have stayed
The perfect little toy
But I’ve have enough
Of your games lil boy

So no more will you

Play with me
Dress me up
Enjoy your little lady
And when you’re done
Put me on a shelf
‘Cuz I ain’t your doll, baby



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Comments

kahlo2013's picture

Pointed extended metaphor that is well crafted and clear. I like the point of view with the power conveyed at the end.

DeannaSweidel's picture

Wanted to thank all for the comments before this thing ends! SO THANK YOU ALL!