coolparadiso's picture



Liner Notes: 

Yup back to dark again. total loss vocals need a bit of cheaty fix bit no time now - this is how it is. it also needs a longer into and middle instrumental which would bring it up to the right length



I see you on every street corner
I see you in a crowd
I hear your delicate whisper
I hear you shout out loud

I see your reflection in shop windows
I see you on the train
I smell your distinctive perfume
Imprinted on my brain

I think of you at night time
I see you in my dreams
I think of you when i first wake up
And all day so it seems


I wish that i could hold you
And Ease my aching heart
There wasn’t enough time
Before we had to part

I only have one answer
Theres only one thing i can do
To take away my pain
And spend my time with you.

So i say goodbye
Please dont all be sad
I have nothing left at all
To take away or add

Please keep your comments respectful, honest, and constructive. Please focus on the song and not the demo.


Aw what a sad 'missing you' song! I really felt this and it made me miss someone close to me. Good job. I will be getting to our collab next Smile

dsweidel's picture

Such moving lyrics and I love the spoken words at the end

billwhite51's picture

the only thig sadder than parting is the years that follow. you truly capture that cotinual despair that never dissipates. even more than the words, your voice tells it all

Kristi's picture

Good job conveying a sad one. The lyrics provide many instances that are so relatable and the music and vocal add a gentleness to the story. Good one.