Locked up in my Heart

Locked up in my Heart

coolparadiso's picture

Liner Notes: 

Lyrics only now. Away from home.

Lyrics: 

Locked up in your Heart

I wish i knew what you were thinking
I might know what to do
I might even have the answers
To help you see it through

I want to make you whole again
I want to see you smile
I want things the way they were
If only for a little while

I want to give it one more go
I do not want to part
But how can we move forward
When its all locked up in your heart

Instrumental

Its never easy letting go
But its the only thing to do
Dont live forever in the past
Just take a different view

I want to give it one more go
I do not want to part
But how can we move forward
When its all locked up in your heart

Im really really trying
But i dont know where it begins
How can i forever pay
For other peoples sins

You need to bury the past
Before it buries me
If you you want to make it work
And live a life so free

I have one last chance i feel
Ive tried fast and I’ve tried slow
But if you don’t unlock your heart
I will really have to go



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Comments

katpiercemusic's picture

It's a very sad story, and one that I'm sure is very relatable to most people. Nicely done!

cleanshoes's picture

These lyrics have such a classic, relatable feel. I'd be interested in setting them to music if you'd like? Let me know!

go for it. I will be home tomorrow and start to catch up - but be good if you can do this. no preferences just do it how you wish.

cleanshoes's picture

Great! Just so you know, I'll be out of town for a few days next week, so I may not be able to work on it right away, but I'll get to it as soon as I can. Thanks!

Peter Arvidson's picture

I can feel the emotion in these lyrics, they exude integrity and the flow seems to work well. Nice work!

musicsongwriter's picture

Beautiful lyrics. Hope to hear the music to them. They feel heartfelt and sad.
Nadia

It's a good write, I hope @cleanshoes can give it a go; - she has a good approach and demo-sound; that would be a good match up for this one. Music 2

JamKar's picture

I can hear music , if you don't get any takers. Nice lyrics!