Rainbow Glory

Rainbow Glory

coolparadiso's picture
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Demo: 

Liner Notes: 

House waking soon. Then into some music. Hopefully next challenge. Found some interesting rhymes here. music aded 20.28 8th July

Lyrics: 

Rainbow glory

The Mexican sun bedazzled me
She appeared from nowhere i knew
She wasn’t one of the many
I guess shes one of the few

One of those special people
Ethereal in their presence
Leaving you feeling so at ease
In every way and sense

I had to share my thoughts with her
But i suspect she already knew
It was all so out of body
A case of deja vu

I said

I can see your rainbow glory
Like an enlightened aura
Like a shadow encircling you,
“I see it clearly senora”

She smiled but didn’t say a word
Although she said much more
I understood her fully
I really knew the score

She smiled and slowly walked away
I could feel where she had been
I stood there all alone
With a feeling so serene



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Comments

littlespiral's picture

Hey, for a skirmish, this is quite good! Can't wait to hear the music later.

colgoo's picture

Nice take, especially for a skirmish!

yam655's picture

That's lovely! I look forward to the demo. Smile

Kevin Emmrich's picture

Well written little mystical story. I like the backing musical bed you laid down for this one. Good writing and performance.

Acousticmaddie's picture

Great skirmish. I LOVE LOVE LOVE how you use your voce in this. Intriguing musical melody