Bangin' On Your Door

Bangin' On Your Door

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Liner Notes: 

We were challenged at the songwriting academy to write a song with the commercial pop sound 'the millennial whoop' - in this case my 'woah ohs!'. This song is designed to be an EDM type pop song so might seem a little at odds with the guitar but I would need at least 12 hours to mock it up into a production. Hopefully you can use your imagination too where I slow it down to be where the 'drop' happens for the beat...

Lyrics: 

BANGIN’ ON YOUR DOOR
(c) 2018 Georgie Cooper
All Rights Reserved

I’ll shout above the noise
To get across my point
I’ll scream until I’m hoarse
Using all of my force

Won’t no one silence me
I’ll go to all extremes
Will get out all my words
To know that I’ve been heard

CHORUS
But if I still can’t get through to you
Then tell me what it is I gotta do
Coz if I still can’t get through to you
I’m gonna keep on goin til I do

Woah oh woah oh
Bangin' on your door
Woah oh woah oh
Bangin' on your door

VERSE
I’ll beat my drum til I’m numb
To get your attention
I’ll make the biggest noise
Until you hear my voice

And I’ll raise bloody hell
Won’t stop ringing my bell
The echoes will resound
Victorious in sound

CHORUS
But if I still can’t get through to you
Then tell me what it is I gotta do
Coz if I still can’t get through to you
I’m gonna keep on goin til I do

Woah oh woah oh
Bangin' on your door
Woah oh woah oh
Bangin' on your door

CHORUS
But if I still can’t get through to you
Then tell me what it is I gotta do
Coz if I still can’t get through to you
I’m gonna keep on goin til I do

Woah oh woah oh
Bangin' on your door
Woah oh woah oh
Bangin' on your door



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Comments

Coolparadiso's picture

I like whoop. Smile nice change up. All this percussion gonna force my uke to make an appearance. . Nice one!

The girl and guitar dynamics give a strong clue of the full band potential in this one. I like Smile

billwhite51's picture

you met all the requirements of the challenge, and got yourelf a damn good song as well. this unique effusion is a lot of fun

Nicely done! I can definitely hear this in an EDM style.

NuJ4X's picture

Just as @metalfoot said, I could absolutely hear this track as an EDM banger for sure! The chorus and the whoa oh's are amazing! Put a hardcore 128-135bpm EDM stomp behind it, throw in some high hats, some acoustic guitar in the vain of Avicii and some pads, risers, and a drop or three and you've got yourself a banger!

IN the meantime, you've got yourself a tune that shines bright like a diamond! I give you an A+ on this jam! #edm4life

kc5's picture

Great fast-paced chorus. I love the change up between the verses and chorus. Fun song.

benjo's picture

thanks for your kind words on my lyric

yes this song is really catchy
had me bouncing along
great guitar and voxal well done