Stop It

Jibbidy34's picture

Stop It

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Liner Notes: 

In my race to the finish line I forgot I never finished this one for the week 6 challenge due to having fallen ill at the time. It is now complete and while not my best it's one more!

Lyrics: 

STOP IT

A E A D E7
I'm asking you to stop it.
I'm asking you to please see my needs
You make me feel weak and on the back foot
So I'm asking you to stop it

A E7
There was a time when you cared about me
Helped me along took my hand steered me
But not so much now
But not so much now

There was a time I knew you loved me
The way that you spoke affectionately
But not so much now
But not so much now

A E A D E7
I'm asking you to stop it.
I'm asking you to please see my needs
You make me feel weak and on the back foot
So I'm asking you to stop it

There was a time when you gave me
Your undivided company
But not so much now
But not so much now

There was a time when you defended me
By my side you would fight for me
But not so much now
But not so much now

A Gm A D E7
I'm asking you to stop it.
I'm asking you to please see my needs
You make me feel weak and on the back foot
So I'm asking you to stop it

A Gm A D E7
I'm asking you to stop it.
I'm asking you to please see my needs
You make me feel weak and on the back foot
So I'm asking you to stop it

Stop it. Stop it. So Stop it.



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Comments

metalfoot's picture

Nicely done, and keep on with the charge for the finish line!

standup's picture

The rhythm is a little complex and dynamic here, which I assume is intentional, but it sounds great. Very solid if a little off balance, which fits the lyric pretty well.