Eternity (Incomplete)

iveg's picture

Eternity (Incomplete)




I was walking outside, watching the full moon set behind the palm trees
Wondering how I would act if I fully acted like I believed
That we are eternal spiritual beings, flawed and running full speed
toward destruction.

Would I still be writing silly songs if I felt they'd be weighed in eternity
Sarcastic or forgiving when I thought that you wronged me
(Ran out of time.

Please keep your comments respectful, honest, and constructive. Please focus on the song and not the demo.


Ah yes but the concept is there! Very dreamlike/deep and meaningful for a short skirmish. Worth developing at a later date maybe?

3tdoan's picture

I think this has promise. I always like asymmetrical lines so the "believed / running full speed towards destruction" is interesting.