Dancing Shadows

AndyGetch's picture

Dancing Shadows

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Liner Notes: 

Superskirmish prompt 'The Moon'. An image of nighttime dancing shadows popped on my head and the song spilled out.

Lyrics: 

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Dancing Shadows

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Dancing shadows on the windowpane
As breeze makes the leaves go wooo
Still moving through undiscovered terrain
Feeling the moon and you

Verse 1
Lying here
The restless sense of longing chased by fear
Disappears
When I’m holding you near

Repeat Chorus

Verse 2
The moon glows
Gravity tides push and pull the undertow
As we grow
Learning replaces yearning the more we know

Repeat Chorus twice



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Comments

kahlo2013's picture

This is so tender and beautiful! Such a lovely gentle guitar fingerpicking and quiet vocals is perfect for the gorgeous sentiment. Great take on the skirmish!

Gone's picture

This is great, amazing amount of creativity for skirmish time. Love the delivery too, the voice inflections etc.

Acousticmaddie's picture

SO honest and heartfelt and such agreat gentle delivery. Fantastic Andy

Jessicagraae's picture

This was very relaxing to listen to. Love the words and the guitar pattern.

tsunamidaily's picture

you could also list this in the arpeggio weekly challenge. the production seems like it could fall apart at any point, and hit a loud note, and it makes it feel like you are walking a very straight line very slowly and deliberately, as a part of the song.

tcelliott's picture

That chorus lyric is great, I like it a lot. And the first verse especially relays the emotion for me as that last line really brings the imagery into focus for me. The second verse really paints a picture as well. Your using metaphor very well here, imo.