In Transit for the Truth

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In Transit for the Truth

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Skirmish theme/prompt was to use one or more of:

IN TRANSIT
MUSTY ROOM
STAIRS GOING SIDEWAYS

Yep, I thought it was crazy too but I actually got a draft of some lyrics I kind of like out of it...

Collaborations welcome!

Lyrics: 

V1
there are to many
doors to false chambers
and slides to slip down
that spin us around
while in transit
from our birth

V2
there are too many
halls to musty rooms
and stairs going sideways
that lead us astray
while in transit
to find worth

PC
but never give up
no...no....no....never stop
until we're all at the top

C
unlock the doors
open the rooms
clear the paths
never assume

build the stairs
secure the steps
light the way
never expect

always search for the truth
(search for the truth)
(search for the truth)
in transit for truth

V3
there are many
steps going nowhere
and paths to dead ends
that hurt us again
while in transit
on this earth

PC
but never give up
no...no....no....never stop
until we're all at the top

C
unlock the doors
open the rooms
clear the paths
never assume

build the stairs
secure the steps
light the way
never expect

always search for the truth
(search for the truth)
(search for the truth)
in transit for truth



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Comments

yam655's picture

This is excellent. It's like a theme song for a fantasy movie. Smile

Donna Devine's picture

Well done! Really fine take on the skirmish prompt(s). You incorporated each of them wonderfully in this well-constructed, insightful message. Smile

Thank you for taking part in the skirmish.

AprilM's picture

Nice - good story and message. Well done!

iHelen's picture

Great uplifting lyrics - a nice, surprising interpretation of the skirmish words. Great work! Smile

musicsongwriter's picture

Beautiful uplifting lyric full of hope and apart from being perfect for this skirmish is also an answer to week 2 challenge "advice". Hope to hear it in a song.
Nadia