Traveling

kahlo2013's picture

Traveling

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Liner Notes: 

title for skirmish: Traveling

Lyrics: 

V1
my thoughts have been traveling
my life has been unraveling
since I first saw you

my joy has been surprising
my wants have been tantalizing
since I talked to you

my heart has been exploding
my love has been unfolding
since I have kissed you

C1
I am traveling...traveling
traveling by the light of love

I am traveling...traveling
traveling next to you

I am traveling by the light of love

V2
my fears have been expanding
my shock has been advancing
since I found her with you

my tears have been compounding
my void has been resounding
since I have lost you

my thoughts have been traveling
my life has been unraveling
since I first saw you

C2
I am traveling ..traveling
traveling in the dark without love

I am traveling...traveling
traveling without you

I am traveling in the dark without love



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Comments

Jyllian's picture

I love the verse set up! Sad love story.

Remarkably tight structure for a skirmish! The rhymes in the miniature verses, the mirroring of the first/last verses and the two choruses, the light and dark. Very nicely done.

tjeff's picture

Love this lyric, especially with the twist in v2. Gonna take a shot at setting this to music later today.