Love and Sand Burns

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Love and Sand Burns

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Liner Notes: 

Title was Sand Burns or Burning Sands

I was falling asleep during this it is unfinished

Lyrics: 

V1
walking on the beach
in hundred degree heat
under scorching sun

climbing on the dunes
with hurricanes soon
during a sandstorm

C
hot sand
burning sand
swirling sand
sand burns

hot sand
burning sand
swirling sand
sand burns

V2
lying on the beach
with you in my reach
under the pale moon

hiding in the dunes
making love with you
fireworks coming soon

C
hot love
burning lone
swirling love
love burns

hot love
burning lone
swirling love
love burns



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Comments

johnstaples's picture

Ooooo, I love this sultry and steamy sand song! Biggrin Nice how you repeat the chorus each time and it is a great chorus! Love your rhyming and how you describe so completely with so few words! You are an ace! Great work!

Jyllian's picture

Very tight - you've used the words well! It does sound sultry.

Acousticmaddie's picture

Lovely and great atmospheric feeling. I love your flow in this. Great message and beautiful written.