Melody

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Melody

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Skirmish title: Melody

Lyrics: 

V1
like the new melody
of a favorite song
that plays over and
over again
I cherish the beauty
of the love we
have been in

PC1
and I always long
oh always long
to hear that song
and the beauty of that
melody again

C1
the love of music
and the music of love
wrapped a melody around my heart

the love of music
and the music of love
played a melody from the start

V2
like the lost melody
of a forgotten song
that stays hidden
deep within
I treasure the memory
of the love we
once were in

PC2
but sometimes I long
oh sometimes l long
to hear that song
and the beauty of that
melody again

C2
the love of music
and the music of love
wrapped a melody around my heart

the love of music
and the music of love
played a melody that was too short

B

ooo.. oo...ooo...oo...ooooo
ooo.. oo...ooo...oo...ooooo

C2
the love of music
and the music of love
wrapped a melody around my heart

the love of music
and the music of love
played a melody that was too short



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Comments

AndyGetch's picture

nice parallel in the verses and variation in the choruses, thanks for playing!

famouspatrick's picture

Nice job. This reads like you had a melody in mind when you wrote it; why not just use that one? Nicely skirmished!

Amanda West's picture

Lovely structure Smile Did you have a melody in your head when you were writing this ?

Acousticmaddie's picture

Great song, lovely structured, I can almost hear a soft melody sneaking up here.