Pens

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Pens

NOT SAFE FOR WORK

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Another one-take with my Zoom H5 in my non-acoustically treated music room.

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Pens

I've tried all of the pens in this cup
And everyone is dry as fuck
Finally find one with ink and start to write
Only to see the words fade to white

So, pull another arrow from your quiver
And shoot it through my soul
Take another arrow from your quiver
And make sure no good deed goes unscolded

This is life and how it goes
Every new experience bestows
A sense of joy and excitement
Only to end in disappointment

So, pull another arrow from your quiver
And shoot it through my soul
Take another arrow from your quiver
And make sure no good deed goes unscolded

So, pull another arrow from your quiver
And shoot it through my soul
Take another arrow from your quiver
And make sure no good deed goes unscolded



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Comments

Acousticmaddie's picture

I like the flow and structure of this one. Great tune. Smooth delivery.

auldy's picture

good dynamics between the soft verse delivery and the more forte chorus. Good chord progressions, I particularly liked the verses.