Be With You

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Be With You

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Oh boy, after the first verse I knew I was in trouble with the lyrics. But I just doubled stuff at the end. Will figure out something later maybe.

This was meant to be a Beatles style o song, but it came out more like Green Day. S'all good. Biggrin

Lyrics: 

Baby, this must feel crazy
But I think that maybe
You need to think this through
Baby, my world is crashing
And I feel like mashing
My way through to you

And I don't know what to do
If I cannot be with you
My life is turning into shades of blue

Baby, when I see you laughing
I feel like passing
My heart to you
Baby, there's a world of danger
In a gaze of a stranger
To a beauty like you

Ooh..
And I don't know what to do
If I cannot be with you
My life is turning into shades of blue

Days spent on a free fall
I'm feeling too small
To eat or sleep
Weeks turn into seasons
Of dreaming
How I will spend them with you

And I don't know what to do
If I cannot be with you
My life is turning into shades of blue
I don't know what to do
If I cannot be with you
So baby would you please
Just think this through



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Comments

Tasha Parker Gibbs's picture

Great sound! Updated Beatles/Green day works Smile Good lyrics - Great production Smile Good work!!

caseewilson's picture

Oh I love how happy this is! I agree with Tasha - it's very Beatles meets Green Day, and I love them both so that's a definite compliment Smile

Acousticmaddie's picture

Great happy and warm sound.Nice played and love the solo part makes me wanna dance .

TheTau's picture

Wow! You are even more Versatile that a Swiss army knife.
Where'd you find the Time Machine?
Russ Dirol

3tdoan's picture

Green Beatles is a surprisingly good combo! Very toe-tappable! Smile

Joshua McLean's picture

Oh man, that chorus is mint. The general vibe is so swingy dancey and here I am bouncing in my chair wanting to snap to it. XD

Silver Machine's picture

Yeah man that's total pop songwriting from a time when pop stars wore suits & nobody bent a string in case they got investigated by the FBI! Biggrin
Crazily Beatle-ish in the melody and arrangement. Great stuff man!

Donna Devine's picture

Loving the vibe here. It's got me 'chair dancing'. Wink Great pop song, very catchy music, and a good lyric.