4th of July

Sw1n3flu's picture

4th of July



Liner Notes: 

Just playing around with my 12 string, dialled the rage back quite a bit....


Let's get real high
It's the 4th of July

We could party
We could party
All night
I said
We could party
We could party
All night

We could party
We could party
All night

If I ask you
To stop filling my glass
Would you do me a favour
and tell me that it's the 4th of July?

Let's get high....

Please keep your comments respectful, honest, and constructive. Please focus on the song and not the demo.


OdilonGreen's picture

Nice guitar, full of energy and exuberance, and I like how at the same time the vocals, even as they talk about partying all night, have a kind of distant, removed quality to them, making them (and the song as a whole) have more of a feel of longing urgency than hedonism. Cool track!

I like it.

I don't know what "dialled the rage back quite a bit..." means, -- I guess I'd have to listen more, other of you stuff. However, I'd add that line. I can't say why... just feel it would fit, and adds a "mind picture" from it's abstraction, inserted into it...
-- I dialled the rage back quite a bit...

Maybe it's a Bridge and reason to repeat... ummm, the last verse... " If I ask you..." to the end one more time?

Anyway, --like it.

Oh...!... the rage, the rage, I get it. So why the hell Smile are you celebrating our holiday? Kidding, kidding...
Anyway, I much prefer this to the phucking train song Wink

So, you're an old-timer here... -- all the best to you this year 5090. I think noodling songs can wind up being our best work, --or, for me, anyway.

Arthur Rossi's picture

Lovely rhythm and performance, I like the sound of the guitar and the tune, which awesomely works with the lyrics. Very enjoyable to listen to...

You did sound like you were getting a bit angry towards the end when you asked to stop filling your glass... Wink You really played that 12 string to the fullest - nice!

Silver Machine's picture

Man, you are a strumming machine! Put your guitar in the recovery position! Biggrin