Unglued (new DEMO Val Cox 9/7/2016)

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Unglued (new DEMO Val Cox 9/7/2016)

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Liner Notes: 

Catching up on yesterday's superskirmish - there was one to write a point of view song with points to switch point of view..

I found myself singing this chorus when driving in my car after listening to a great song from a musician I adore so I ran with it.

I hear it as uptempo fun party dance pop with more contemplation in the bridge..

I'm not sure what lesbopop is as I stole that tag from Helen and Val.. But I think it could fit this song

THANKS VAL! love Ya

Lyrics: 

V1
when I see your brown eyes smile
when I hear you laugh and sing
when I think of you awhile
when I hear you rock the strings
I hate to admit that it is so
but I start to loose control
and I don't know what to do
when my thoughts run so far away
so far and fast with you...

C
because
I want to come unglued
I want to come unglued
I want come unglued with you
oh yes I know that's not what
good girls like me should do...but
I want to come unglued
I want to come unglued
I want come unglued with you

V2
when I see you in my dreams
when I hear you in my thoughts
when I think of you each day
when I want you I feel caught
I hate to admit that it is so
because I still loose control
and I don't know what to do
when my thoughts run so far away
so far and fast with you...

C
because
I want to come unglued
I want to come unglued
I want come unglued with you
oh yes I know that's not what
good girls like me should do...but
I want to come unglued
I want to come unglued
I want come unglued with you

B
then it becomes less clear to me
as it depends on how you see
will glue hold love together
or pulling apart set love free
to love unglued and happily
so I will wait until I hear..
hear you say to me.....

C
I want to come unglued
I want to come unglued
I want come unglued with you
oh yes I know that's not what
good girls like me should do...but
I want to come unglued
I want to come unglued
I want come unglued with you



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Comments

Stephen Wordsmith's picture

I like that the slightly gushing tone (with all the repetition, run on lines and ellipses) matches perfectly with the idea of coming unstuck/unglued. Would make for a fun, uptempo poppy number. OK, I just read your liner notes and it said that that's your intention. Great. I think you succeeded :P

Valerie Cox's picture

Unglued is a great word with lots of connotations. Everything from scary to exciting comes to mind. I think I will make.an excellent lesbopop song!

garner's picture

I love these lyrics ... i agree with @Valerie Cox ... the idea of "come unglued" lends itself to so many different interpretations ... I imagined it as the "fall head over heels lose complete control" type of "ungluing" (is that a word??) ... these were my favorite lines ... "will glue hold love together/or pulling apart set love free" ... wonderful lyrics ... excellent job!

sheamiejay's picture

Similar idea to Heart's "Crazy On You" I like it. Supa- catchy. The slow delivery of the chorus gives it extra meaning.