Let Me Try Again

Let Me Try Again

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Lyrics: 

V1
words left unsaid
at the end
of a journey
things left undone
when we go
in a hurry
come to me now
come to me late
because you've
already gone..

PC
forgive me ....I was wrong...

C
too many times
I forgot to say
too many times
I forgot to show
too many times
I forgot to be
there for you
when you needed me most
when you needed me to be true
will you let me try again?
try again to love you...

V2
love left inside
at the end
of a journey
gifts left unopened
when we are
in a hurry
I have for you now
I have for you late
but now you've
already gone

PC
forgive me...I was wrong....

C
too many times
I forgot to say
too many times
I forgot to show
too many times
I forgot to be
there for you
when you needed me most
when you needed me to be true
will you let me try again?
try again to love you...

B
sweet gifts of
kind words
good things
and deep love
are what I
forgot to
give you then

sweet gifts of
kind words
good things
and deep love
are what I
want to
give you now

C
too many times
I forgot to say
too many times
I forgot to show
too many times
I forgot to be
there for you
when you needed me most
when you needed me to be true
will you let me try again?
try again to love you...



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Comments

sam sorrow's picture

these lyrics are really powerful. "things left undone when we go in a hurry" in particular caught my attention. I read regret in the lines too. well done.

Valerie Cox's picture

We all fail at expressing love sometimes and all want to have the chance to do better. That's very universal. I think showing real regret and genuinely wanting to do better are hard for someone who loves you to say no to. I think this could a very intense and powerful ballad.

garner's picture

beautiful beautiful lyrics ... imagined this as a huge pop ballad ... made me teary-eyed when i read them ... which probably means i need to apologize to someone ... evocative and moving ... the ending lines of the chorus are very raw ... great great lyrics!

musicsongwriter's picture

Very moving, sincere, poignant lyric. Absolutely must be in a song. I'm really hoping to hear it. If no one offers music I'd love to have a try if you are happy with the idea but I appreciate you might like something much bigger than what I can offer. Enjoyed reading very much.
Nadia

musicsongwriter's picture

Dear Liz, yes please send me your melody. I don't know if I'll be able to work around it or not but it will be helpful to see what you have in mind for your beautiful words. Please pm me via the form and I'll reply as soon as I possibly can. Thank you.
Nadia

metalfoot's picture

Really powerful words; I'm excited to see what you and Nadia can make it to become, musically.