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Agh.
Such a sad story.
And the two-stress lilt of the poetry just totally drives this home in an extremely matter-of-fact but emotionally devastating way.
Simple, short and poignant. You're good at these understated shrot lyrics (would work as slow sung with lots of space between lines) (another time I would have waved for possible collab but emotionally we're drained and messy at the moment. I'll come back and look at more)
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Agh.
Such a sad story.
And the two-stress lilt of the poetry just totally drives this home in an extremely matter-of-fact but emotionally devastating way.
Simple, short and poignant. You're good at these understated shrot lyrics (would work as slow sung with lots of space between lines) (another time I would have waved for possible collab but emotionally we're drained and messy at the moment. I'll come back and look at more)