Don Juan

Don Juan

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Liner Notes: 

Sean Paul vocals or someone like him is what came to mind for this write.
Guy's trying to persuade girl that the guy she's interested in is a womanizer and is not Mr. Right.
The ending for the singer clearly states his postion in it all.

Open to collaboration if anyone wants to give reggae or island style music a try. Sean Paul has had a number of pop hits with a reggae flavor.

Maybe a spanish guitar to go along with the rhythmic vibe and island accent delivery.

Doesn't have to be reggae of course. Lol
Suppose vocals could be female as well.

Lyrics: 

Don Juan

Girl wipe ya tears
Dry those eyes
He was a snake in the grass
And he tell you all lies
You think for a while
When he come home late
And when you caught in him the act
You should finally see straight

Get over him
Move on

Cause he's a Don Juan and he'll keep on
Playin the field, no he won't yield
He's a Don Juan, make him be gone
Get em' outta your mind, and see
He's a Don Juan, when he comes on
Don't let him bring you down on your knee
He's a Don Juan, sugar coating the wrong
If only, if only, you'd see

Don't be stupid
Just let go
Don't be tempted by his words
You gotta hi pro glow
You know he ain't good
But ya still in trance
He' ain't the lover boy ya think
When you want his romance

Get over him
Move on

Cause he's a Don Juan and he'll keep on
Playin the field, no he won't yield
He's a Don Juan, make him be gone
Get em' outta your mind, and see
He's a Don Juan, when he comes on
Don't let him bring you down on your knee
He's a Don Juan, sugar coating the wrong
If only, if only, you'd see

If only, if only you'd see
Me

Chorus repeats X 1 - fading off - midway

Sunfire © 2021



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Comments

K.C.'s picture

this a great fun song with with a message! While you mention spanish style, I'm also hearing a reggae version!

I think it has some really great movement! Nice write!!

KC

Belladonna's picture

Very nice! Love the messages and setting. Good imagry.

cindyrella's picture

Great flow and I think it could imagine a few different ways that would work for the music!

AndreaB's picture

The way the words are written gives a nice reggae feel. The story is great and flows beautiful. It should make fun song. I can't wait to hear it!

coolparadiso's picture

I really like this, I can hear it being sung, great structure. Really good.